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Morning Rainbows
August 25, 2010
There are rainbows on the walls
on my ceiling, on the floor
Little spots of color
that were never there before
Each splash is vibrant, energized;
yet so completely still
I wish I could somehow catch them
and drink of rainbows my fill
© Rosanna S., Phoenix, AZ
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MayaElyashiv PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 7:28 am
I was very hesitant about that last line, because when I read it in my head it sounded right but when I asked people to read it aloud it didn't...it's one of those ones where there's a weird pause in the middle that if you don't know it's there it sounds really off.
apocalyptigirl BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:55 pm
Aww! I love this! So simple and yet so poetic...:) The only thing was the last line; "and drink of rainbows my fill." The placement of "of" made it a tad awkward, though now as I say it a few times it seems to flow better each time...Good job! 5 stars :)
