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Cold Hearted

December 7, 2010
By Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)


I sit in front of the warm, sizzling fire
For him to be back is all I desire
Stiff and cold he is now dead
And now he lays in his forever bed.

Even though his heart was cold
To women it was easily sold
I bought the bitter man’s soul
While the cancer took its toll.

Now that his time is up
I realize that our short-lived fairytale wasn’t enough
My heart still aches for his love
While he rests far above.

As the shadows dance across the wall
The memories flood down the hall
Tears stream from my eyes
And from my mouth escapes a cry.

The pain is too much to bear
For it gives myself quite a scare
I hug my knees close to my chest
And try to get some rest.

But I can’t because I miss him too much
I want to be within his clutch
I know my love is gone forever
But one day in heaven we will eventually be together.



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NewNana said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 2:46 pm
Great Poem!  Poetry comes from the heart and not the head.  Keep up the good work. 

Taddly said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:31 pm

HAPPY CAPT. JAMES COOK WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I STARTED THIS NOT LANEY MARIE.

p.s. THIS WAS A GOOD POEM.


on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:29 pm

I am very impressed with your fabulous poem!:)

Happy cjc week!!!:)


Bieber27 said...
on Jan. 2 2011 at 6:20 pm
hahaha but u luv me!!!!

on Jan. 2 2011 at 12:15 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Wow, you are such a dork!!!

on Jan. 2 2011 at 12:08 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Thank you!!!  That means a lot :)

on Jan. 1 2011 at 10:12 am
What a wonderful article.  You have great potential and will succeed with this writing talent!

Bieber27 said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 8:50 am
Anytime!!!! I dont think i will ever be as good as you miss kiser!!!!

on Dec. 30 2010 at 10:33 am
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Thanks!!!!

suzib said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 10:11 am
What an amazing piece of work.  This teen has a talent!!!

on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:33 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Sure old fart!!!!  Anytime for you!!!! :)  Thanks!!!

Old fart said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:20 pm
Hey teenybopper, awesome job... can I get your autograph when you are rich and famous?

on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:19 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Haha thank!!!  You're in my English class, though, you have the same abilities I do!!!  I hate the user name though!!!!

Bieber27 said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:15 pm
Omg Lindsey i love it!!!!! Its awesome!!! I still cant belive that you wrote this!!!!

on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:13 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Thanks!!!!

Saturdaybaby said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:12 pm

that was really really really good

its paige btw