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Charmed

March 12, 2011
By Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

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Charmed by your ways Am I,
Heart soaring, gliding, flying high.
To see the world from another’s eyes.
Hanging on to forbid goodbyes.

You’re colder to me then a lake of ice.
As if I was a swarm of mice.
I’ve said it before and I’ll say it twice,
My love is greater than a field of Rice.

Your barricade is my dreaded foe
The kind of enemy I’ve yet to know.
Piercing my heart with your wicked bow,
I bleed my love into the snow.

Then you saw what I thought was loss
A feeling overpowering and a dominate boss
Your anger and spite you were quick to toss.
As we stood and held each other among the moss.

© Angela B., Holland Patent, NY

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a new poem type (I think)
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Internal-Love PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 5:52 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing&#039;s black or white, its all just a shade of gray---<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> TI &quot;Live your Life&quot; ft Rihanna

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well the "field of rice" was kinda corny, I'm not gonna lie.........but other then that........it was BEE-YOU-TEE-FULL! :D
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 14 2011 at 11:09 am
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
40 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!&quot;/&quot;I&#039;m goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow.&quot;

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i thought it was corny but thanks! XD
Internal-Love PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 12 2011 at 5:33 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
33 articles 3 photos 310 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing&#039;s black or white, its all just a shade of gray---<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> TI &quot;Live your Life&quot; ft Rihanna

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Shakespeare would be proud
Internal-Love PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 12 2011 at 5:31 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
33 articles 3 photos 310 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing&#039;s black or white, its all just a shade of gray---<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> TI &quot;Live your Life&quot; ft Rihanna

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:*) this smiley says it all. This is outstanding. The type of thing I felt like reading. YOU ARE A WONDERFUL POET. And dont you make me spell it out for you cause this is wonderful. A true work of art. Beach is right, its touching. i wish i could write like this..........i see this ending up in a poetry book dude!! I'm struck with awe!! :*)
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 10 2011 at 9:55 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If You Don&#039;t Fight Back, You&#039;ve Already Lost.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs.&quot;

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this is just beautiful, and so touching! i love the way you desbribed... everything! it really made me think! the only thing is i would have made it a smidge shorter, but that is just me, i really love it!!