Misery | Teen Ink


April 17, 2011
By J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"My greatest writings are on the pages of life"
- J-Poetry-R

i say I'll see you soon,
but soon ain't getting closer,
tomorrows on its way,
but today is never over,
the sun brings a new start,
but life only shows me dark,
even crowded by others,
loneliness still leaves a mark,
they say things get worse,
before they reach better,
worse is all that's here,
and it seems to last forever,
the forecast reads clear,
but my mind stays clouded,
my heart is reading pain,
there ain't no doubt about it,
once you left my life,
my life went to ashes,
once my spirit was whole,
now it only crashes,
i wait for your return,
and pray our just around the corner,
but every corner i turn,
despair grips me stronger,
i try not to live off hate,
but hate lives off me,
it can't be just to hate,
but hate keeps me happy,
how much more can i stand,
when i don't even have my crutches,
you were my all,
and now I'm in misery's clutches.

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This article has 3 comments.

Kipitama said...
on Feb. 15 2012 at 9:07 am
Kipitama, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

I can connect with this in two ways: my ex and my dad. Promises made that are never kept always leave one's heart aching, even if you know they're not coming back. it still hurts. On a happier note, I loved the poem. Great job!

on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:21 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow...I Love it! Great discription of how you feel. Please keep on writing! Its alwasy an honor to read and comment on your work! Great Job!!

EvonkaH BRONZE said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 6:49 am
EvonkaH BRONZE, Lakeland, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Amor no es Amor"
Prepare for the worst and hope for the best.

I am in love with this poem. You summed up the last 2 years of my life in this beautiful piece of artfully constructed words. Please continue to write. _EvonkaH_