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I hate you
June 11, 2011
you made it clear
you left no doubt
now i want you gone
i want you out
of my heart and life
of my mind and dreams
of my expectations
out of everything
at first i thought id be OK
but i know that's just lies
I'm covering for my bOKen heart
and tearing in my eyes
I'm wishing that you'd go away
but i don't want you gone
there's now a void inside of me
that's wondering what went wrong
© Patrick B., Stony Brook, NY
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This article has 4 comments.
Hi! Ur poem is great no doubt about that.. But wat i would say is Instead of
My heart and life
u could've written
My heart and mind
And then
My dreams and life..
Just suggesting...:) And the rest is great..
And i would want you to write a happy poem ...TRy it it'l make you feel better..Again just suggeting..
Silent_Artist SILVER said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 5:06 pm
Be sure to capitalize I. Also, forgot the R in broken. Just things I noticed in my quick look-over. Other then that, good job.
