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Let it Rain!
February 16, 2008
Figments of the mind
Lost in time
You claimed to be forever there
To let me live without a care
Each time you lie
Thinking of another alibi
You leave us here to cry
The love to die
So why is this question evermore
You have not seen what I have in store
They say that blood is thicker than water,
But blood isn’t there for you to drink
So its water, that is always there
I think
Let it pour
Let the love of others reign
They shall take away the pain
That u have scarred upon my name
I want to feel the rain
Just let me feel the rain. . . .
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This article has 9 comments.
Emi said...
on Jan. 15 2009 at 5:37 pm
THis is the best poem ever!!!!!!!
faby said...
on Oct. 30 2008 at 2:19 am
Beautiful with a ring of truth and depth. Excellent play of words. Keep developing your craft.
malka said...
on Sep. 23 2008 at 3:08 pm
Real deep. i too want to know the inspiration for this poem. It is awesome amanda. keep writing
katerina613 said...
on Sep. 17 2008 at 12:47 am
A very enrapturing poem!! Very deep thoughts!!
holly said...
on Sep. 17 2008 at 12:02 am
yet another excellent poem amanda! i love it! you are truly gifted! keep up the good work!
Hails said...
on Sep. 16 2008 at 8:57 pm
I love this poem. I so wanna know the inspiration!
Julinejb said...
on Sep. 16 2008 at 6:15 pm
Great job!
DANNY said...
on Sep. 16 2008 at 6:09 pm
what a well written piece of literature!!
Ray said...
on Sep. 7 2008 at 10:46 pm
omg, that is sooo good! i loved itm good job