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November 11, 2011
By iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Nobody can make you feel inferior without their consent. -Eleanor Roosevelt

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I feel so alone
Does no one see
Im always sad
Is it just me

How can no one tell
That Im dying inside
Am I that good of an actor
Would they even care if tomorrow i died?

Or do they just not care
And chose to ignore
my desperate plea
For an open door

What would happen
If I let them know
Would they run away
Or help me go

Somebody, anybody
Look at me for real
See past my front
Look past the steal

I guess its my fault
That no one knows
BUt maybe I regret that
Because all Im feeling is alone

© Monica L., St. George, UT

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iloveu32 SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 6:54 pm
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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yeah, i think we all could at one time or another, thanx :) 
Acastillo GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 6:27 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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I really liked this because I could relate to it.
iloveu32 SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:37 am
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Thanx :) 
sassysarahemokitty BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:35 am
sassysarahemokitty BRONZE, San Francisco, California
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my heart cracks every time some one teases me or says something about me. ive tried,over and over and over to open my eyes. look at my life and tell me when did i die? cuz i'm not alive.- Sarah Morrison

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i think it's really good :)
iloveu32 SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:25 am
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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help!!!!! i did spell it wrong haha sad face lol
iloveu32 SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:23 am
iloveu32 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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thanx :) lol it was a newer one :) thanx 

 

sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:21 am
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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&quot;Afterall, a loose screw doesn&#039;t want to need, and a hammer doesn&#039;t want to be needed.&quot; -Me<br /> <br /> &quot;Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely.&quot; -Me

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I LOVE THIS, really! The only thing I can say is that you spelled "steal" wrong. It should be "steel." But other than that, this is seriously amazing. I loved your rhyming. I loved the whole poem. And nice title. I also loved how you ended it with the same word as your title is. I tend to do that alot too, lol. FANTASTIC JOB! SO surprised you haven't got any comments yet, haha. Keep writing!! :)