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Help me.

November 27, 2011
By Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

Crushed dreams.
Vacant soul.
Ripped heart.
Gaping hole.
Messed up.
Twisted thought.
Haunted mind.
Memories blot.
Tears dry.
All alone.
Worst fear.
Inward groan.
So lost.
Left behind.
Hurt deep.
Eyes blind.
Help me.

The author's comments:
A desperate cry for help...

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on Mar. 6 2012 at 7:12 pm
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can't believe how you could express so much emotion in just a couple of words synced together! awesome poem!!! check out my work too!! thanxx

on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:03 pm
Odile,OhOdile SILVER, Mumbai, Other
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forgiveness is the scent the rose leaves on the heel that crushes it

wow! thats like reallllly awesome!!! i love it... especially the fact that you used just two words in each line and the impact of just those two words is so strong!!! realllly good :)

on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:45 pm
KWeiberg321 SILVER, Cocoa, Florida
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"I figure life is a gift and I don't intend on wasting it. You don't know what hand you're gonna get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at make each day count."

Twisted thought. & Haunted mind. <--- Loved those lines. This is really deep and down to earth. Good job.

on Dec. 11 2011 at 2:45 pm
Selustin_Gieber SILVER, Overland Park, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
I have no quote that i'm in love with, but here's the one at the top of my head right now:
"An eye for an eye and the whole world goes blind." Gandhi....
I also like : " Don't wait for your boat to come to you, swim out to IT." ANonoymous...

this is reakky good

i think it has a good idea to it


Rain. SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 2:17 pm
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Twisted thought is a great line i enjoyed it (: keep writing !