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Prostitute
December 11, 2011
The whole world shook
But yet I stayed by your side
But you were so stubborn
That you turned to the world
Before you turned to me
So I shook the world
To get rid of all the
People who were untrue
To you
It's ironic, actually
Because when I did that
You were stuck with me
So you ran
You couldn't believe
That someone like me
Could love someone
Like you
It's true that you defiled
Yourself
But even a girl defiled
Is a girl loved
So be loved
By me
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Angel_Writer GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 12:10 pm
I like it. You are learning to create the flow in your words, as I am myself. Keep writing, and you will become better.
enc@geLoves BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 8:42 pm
Thanks a lot!!!!
enc@geLoves BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 2:43 pm
Awww! Thanks.
readlovewrite SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 12:27 pm
This is amazing. I read it twice through and I thought I understood it at first....But it is like reading Shakespeare - you read it once and it means one thing, and then you read it once more and it is like the poem has a whole new meaning. This is really strong, and I really like how you broke up your lines and stanzas (especially the first three or four). Keep writing, this is really good!
enc@geLoves BRONZE said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 9:23 pm
Thanks that really means a lot.
Wow. I can't believe I'm saying this but this has to be the best poem on this website I have ever read. For once, I can honestly say there is nothing that needs to be changed. The only part that maybe could use a little bit of work are the last 2 lines. They seem a little weak and generic, but maybe in time something better might come to you. I have no suggestions for it. I love the transitions between stanzas, and I love the metaphor! Really, really great job! This should be published in the magazine for sure!
