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My heart

July 1, 2012
By justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

My heart is like an open book
All you have to do is take a look
It shows the real me
Here I am for everyone to see

It beats soft and calm
It's the pulse near my palm
But sometimes it's locked
It keeps loved ones blocked

It sometimes is hostile
It keeps a distance of a mile
When I'm happy it poses
When I'm sad it closes

Even though I ponder
I never let my heart wander

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bigard GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2013 at 11:39 pm
bigard GOLD, Newton IL, Illinois
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nice and simple!

on Jul. 22 2012 at 5:59 pm
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

Very nice! Good ryhming.

on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:29 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

great job! loved the rhyming

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2012 at 10:31 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Hey just me, I really liked this poem. Great job! I really like the part of my when im sad my heart closes. Great line. Suggestion: maybe add more imagery