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Roses

January 21, 2013
By Anonymous

I peer downward, through the dark blue glass,
shattered, and shards of broken glass. My broken heart.
I find myself in a strange new place.
A sparkling glass castle, with a glorious sunset.
I search for my lost soul.
Warily I step upon the smooth white marble.
Flawless, so it seems. Painted colors mask
the clouds, creating a breathtaking glow,
shrouding the place of perfection.
A rose falls silently from the sky, softly as the snow.
I drink in my minds masterpiece.
My gaze falls upon a lone willow tree,
branches like arms, reaching to me, as
though longing for an embrace.
It stands tall, alone, proud.
I step off the sparkling path, drawn by
the tree’s enchantment.
I sense a change, and the rose falls, dies,
at my feet. The night breaks over
the perfect world.
“Gone,” whispers the darkness. “Gone.”
The stars do not shine. The pillow of
grass beneath my feet turns to knives.
I venture onward, a crimson river trails
behind me. I cannot stop. Rose thorns
have travelled up my arms. Ripping, tearing.
Crimson diamonds add color to the silver
knives. The darkness is no longer quiet.
My name echoes louder, louder, in the wind.
Shadows lurk in every corner.

My eyes are pulled to the castle.
I find my reflection, staring back at me.
Dark eyes, bloody arms and legs,
all of my own design. A single blue
tear falls, to wash away the crimson.
Lightning strikes the mystifying image.
I watch myself shatter.
Turning away, I continue on to the willow
tree, arms no longer welcoming.
I draw nearer, having spotted a figure.
My lost soul.
Eyes wide open, gaze sightlessly ahead. Black hair
blowing around the white and lifeless face.
A single rose tied to its wrist.
My soul sways gently, hung by its
regrets. The rose falls to the palm of my
hand. I run my wrist across its lovely
thorns. I lie beneath the dark willow tree,
crimson roses as my tears.


The author's comments:
i had created an image, a fantasy really, to try and cover up the darkness. so when reality hit, it was like a slap across the face from my depression.

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BlottedInk said...
on Aug. 16 2013 at 12:42 pm
BlottedInk, Searsmont, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"The most wasted day of all is that on which we have not laughed." -Nicholas Chamfort

wow that was soo cool! great description :)

on Aug. 15 2013 at 3:39 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Great poem! FIlled with grand emotion! 5/5 :D

on Aug. 15 2013 at 2:44 pm
Truth_and_Love SILVER, Ponte Vedra Beach, Florida
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Really good work! I liked it a lot. Such vivid imagery... You transported me to a fantasy world. It felt like a dream.

on Aug. 14 2013 at 8:27 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

OMG PERFECTION ON PAGE! i lvoed your word chocie and everything i was capivated the whole time this is just really good.

on Jun. 10 2013 at 9:12 pm
slytherin_girl SILVER, Granger, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I kissed the scars on her skin. I still think you're beautiful, and I don't ever wanna lose my best friend." ~ Pierce the Veil

Wow, thank you!!!

on Mar. 1 2013 at 9:45 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

OMG this is exactly what i pictured when i was writing a book of mine.  Wow you blown my mind  My favorite line is "My eyes are pulled to the castle.  I find my relfection, starring back at me."

Snova BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2013 at 9:35 pm
Snova BRONZE, Tecumseh, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a Maze and Love is the Riddle. :)

Wow. This was amazing! I loved this.

on Feb. 18 2013 at 12:24 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

I love it! I love it! its incredibly me!! Omg, I love it

on Feb. 13 2013 at 4:34 pm
slytherin_girl SILVER, Granger, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I kissed the scars on her skin. I still think you're beautiful, and I don't ever wanna lose my best friend." ~ Pierce the Veil

thank you :)

on Feb. 11 2013 at 4:21 pm
Smileykin234 SILVER, Owasso, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not lazy, I'm an energy saver.

CANT BEAT ME THEN jOIN ME1

Its wonderful and I was so lost into it, I actually felt as if I was there with you. Its Amazing detail and you can feel the mood. Its that..... Just Wow Im so Impressed by it.

on Feb. 3 2013 at 5:15 pm
slytherin_girl SILVER, Granger, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I kissed the scars on her skin. I still think you're beautiful, and I don't ever wanna lose my best friend." ~ Pierce the Veil

thanks for the advice! :)

on Feb. 3 2013 at 5:02 pm
Sakuya PLATINUM, Richmond, Virginia
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I like poems that tell a story especially since you have some nice imagery going on though there are moments where I wish instead of telling(just stating that you have shattered for example, which don't get me wrong has power in and of itself) showing it like the million pieces you have become or something like that. I still love this piece either way though!!

on Feb. 3 2013 at 4:16 pm
slytherin_girl SILVER, Granger, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I kissed the scars on her skin. I still think you're beautiful, and I don't ever wanna lose my best friend." ~ Pierce the Veil

wow, thank you! that really means a lot to me :)

on Feb. 3 2013 at 4:10 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

This is..... just- I can't describe it. It's amazing! The beauty and heartbreak, sorrow and love all rolled up in one package called a poem.... It's breathtaking. Out of five stars, this is easily an 83.