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Dragon

March 20, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments

I made a dragon out of string,
A tiny, wiggling, writhing thing,
I blew upon it and it stirred,
It shook itself and then it roared.



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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 6:50 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thanks :) :)

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 6:49 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thank you very much :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 4:05 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

The second line contains beautiful alliteration. The whole poem however contains vivid imagery that comes to life like your dragon.

on Mar. 28 2013 at 10:59 pm
monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Fair means that everybody gets what they need and the only way to get what you need is to make that happen yourself.&quot; Rick Riordan

Very nice I could really picture the dragon coming to life. It's nice and short and just awsome, nice job.