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Tempatation

October 22, 2013
By BreathInAndOut PLATINUM, London, Ohio
BreathInAndOut PLATINUM, London, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"People cry, not because they're weak. It's because they've been strong for too long"


Temptation is everywhere.
In your heart and in your soul.
In your mind and in your words.
In your actions and in your thoughts.
In your home and in your school.
In your car and in your pool.

But the most important place to look for Temptation is in you dreams, for many dreams may become real in time and so will the temptation in them.


The author's comments:
Everywhere I look there is Temptation lurking in the shadows, but I can't seem to get it to go away. I think that it will remain there forever, right by my side. Some temptation you may think that you could even touch.

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on Dec. 2 2013 at 8:29 pm
BreathInAndOut PLATINUM, London, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People cry, not because they're weak. It's because they've been strong for too long"

Thank you for your Addvice i need more of that time and again.

on Dec. 2 2013 at 8:25 pm
EmmaClaire0823 GOLD, Bay Minette, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

I think this is a really relatable topic and you did a great job convaying your thoughts and expressing the different ways temptation can captivate people. If I were to change anything I might take out all the "and"s and just list the different places to find temptation. I don't know if that is something you would like to change, just something to consider.