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Who I Am

May 20, 2014
By nikkifuentes BRONZE, Wimauma, Florida
nikkifuentes BRONZE, Wimauma, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.” _




Albert Einstein


I am a poet writing of my pain.
I am a person living a life of shame.
I am your daughter hiding my depression.
I am your sister making a good impression.
I am your friend acting like Im fine.
I am a wisher wishing this life werent mine.
I am a girl who thinks of suicide.
I am a teenager pushing her tears aside.
I am a student who doesnt have a clue.
I am the girl sittin next to you.
I am the one asking you to care.
I am your best friend hoping youll be there.


The author's comments:
i was going through hard times

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on Jun. 4 2014 at 7:44 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

I was right. This poem is a little less cliche, as it tells of how ANYONE can be suicidal. I like it. It's a little repetitive, but I like it. Just tone it down on the end rhyme. Not every line needs to rhyme with another. Good poem, though. 4/5

on May. 28 2014 at 9:12 am
bewareofbunnyrabbits SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Empty yourself and let the universe fill you." -Yogi Tea

:( I hope you are better now.