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To a Lost Friend: I'm Waiting

June 22, 2014
By Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir


Lost again I think you are
Goodness gracious, you've lost your head
You've gotten into trouble again
I see blue and I see red

Red I see for your hostility
And indifference when I was in need
You ignored all of my lonesome ways
And my cries you failed to heed

I see red for your foolishness
You were always into trouble
But I loved and cared for you anyways
But now you've gone again and fumbled

I see red because you lied to me
You said you'd always stay
Loyal to my side always
Never to be led astray

I see red because I was alone
Alone right next to you
But you had other things that you cared about
Then to see your promises through

I see blue because you were my best friend
Half of my life you had
But when a opportunity knocked
You ran and left me sad

I see blue because I'm waiting
I've been waiting patiently here
You threw me out of your life
But when you return, I'll be waiting here

I say blue because I know your heart
You're a smart and caring friend
But misguided by your life of lies
I'm afraid you've reached the end

I see blue because I know
That I won't talk to you for a while
But wether that's months or years to wait
I'll welcome you back here with a smile

Will you know my boyfriend
Will you know my fiancée
Will you every return back to my side
To witness my wedding day

Come back, come back
I beg of you
Turn not away from me
You've hurt me badly
And cut me deep
But my friend you'll always be


The author's comments:
Almost everyone has gone through the loss of a good friend to a mistake they've made. The worst pain is knowing that even though they're gone, you'd be willing to welcome them back.

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Paris1997 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2014 at 3:24 pm
Paris1997 GOLD, Lakeside, California
13 articles 4 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The power of imagination makes us infinite. -John Muir

Thank you so much!

on Jun. 26 2014 at 12:27 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

I totaly realate to this! This was REALLY good. I love it!

on Jun. 25 2014 at 3:40 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

Also- could you check out some of my work? I would really like some feedback. thank you!

on Jun. 25 2014 at 3:38 pm
TevyRae PLATINUM, Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
24 articles 7 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Here is a small fact: You are going to die." ~The Book Thief
"You have no stupidity inside of your adorable little self." ~Mikey Pasterik

I agree with what Poetintraining said, but other than that, it's a very good poem. I can eaisily relate to it, and I'm sure many others can. Awesome topic and a lovely read. I enjoyed it.

on Jun. 25 2014 at 3:38 pm
Sourwatermelon SILVER, Fryeburg, Maine
8 articles 1 photo 8 comments
This is really good!!!!, I loved the line, "you ingnored all of my lonesome ways, And my cries you failed to heed" :), can you check my poem out???  TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/690263/The-stars-will-rest/

on Jun. 25 2014 at 12:40 pm
Poetintraining BRONZE, La Mesa, California
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments
Wow great poem! Some words misspelled,and I would add a little more imagry,  but the rythem is great, with a wonderful story to it. Keep up the good work!!

wjdhbjD SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 12:39 pm
wjdhbjD SILVER, None, Other
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your smile change the world, but don't let the world change your smile."

That's amazing!!!!