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Fortress

September 11, 2014
By pibex PLATINUM, Columbus, Ohio
pibex PLATINUM, Columbus, Ohio
27 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you fall down a bottomless pit you die of starvation.


I need a place to hide myself

A fortress for my mind

A place where no one laughs or shouts

A place that I can find

 

I need a place to put myself

Away from mocking crowds

A place where sorrow is no more

A place there are no shrowds

 

I need a place all on my own

To stock up and refresh

A place to stop the whispering

And grant myeslf some rest

 

I need a place to hide myself

A fortress for my mind

A place where no one laughs or shouts

A place that I can find



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on Sep. 17 2014 at 8:43 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Haha, it's no problem. : )

pibex PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 16 2014 at 4:48 pm
pibex PLATINUM, Columbus, Ohio
27 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you fall down a bottomless pit you die of starvation.

Sorry about my grammericalness. Here I am writing poems and my gramiricalness and spellings are horriblenesses. ;D

on Sep. 16 2014 at 9:27 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Thank you. : )

pibex PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 15 2014 at 8:34 pm
pibex PLATINUM, Columbus, Ohio
27 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you fall down a bottomless pit you die of starvation.

Thank you! ^_^  I just read you're Mad Hatter poem and it's really great. :D

on Sep. 14 2014 at 11:10 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I love it. Your poem is absolutely, amazing and wonderful. I can connect. I love people, especially the ones I care for, but sometimes I need to be alone by myself sometimes, to think and stuff like that. I can connect to your poem, very much. Thank you for sharing this! 

pibex PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 14 2014 at 12:00 pm
pibex PLATINUM, Columbus, Ohio
27 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you fall down a bottomless pit you die of starvation.

Thanks! Sometimes, I just wish that people would see that I need to be alone, but I'm not upset at them. :D

on Sep. 14 2014 at 3:36 am
BUFEKABAMOTI SILVER, Abuja,
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greatness is not achieved by never falling but by rising every time you fall.

Wow! this is really nice, just exactly how i feel sometimes.