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Tired

January 4, 2009
By xXpoetryaiXx SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
xXpoetryaiXx SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Give into love or live in fear"


People been tellin me time and time again

I just cant take it anymore

This is a deep regret

Fallin in love with u

Is the worse thing i ever done

The fights,The tears, The heart break

Dont you notice im tired

Im sick of it all cant you see

The only reason im with you

is cuz no matter wat i cant tear you away i need you with me baby

I dont know why but i just want you with me

Im in love with you

and

Im just tired of being away from you



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Nommoc GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2013 at 9:52 pm
Nommoc GOLD, Jackson, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Roses are red. Violets are blue. An original poem is long overdue.

I loved your poem, but to be perfectly honest with you it's kind of hard to take it very seriously when the grammar is so bad. The thoughts and emotions are perfect just check your grammar. It's just hard to appreciate the amazing thought behind it when the grammar is so awful. I still loved your poem. :) I hope this helps you out with your next poem.

on Mar. 7 2011 at 5:30 pm
KobyObi4 BRONZE, Lemont, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We live by faith not by sight." ---2 Corinthians 5:7

Wow this makes a lot of sense. I like how I, along with a lot of other people, can relate too it! Keep up the good work! :)

on Apr. 1 2010 at 7:17 pm
mandi caldwell GOLD, Christana, Pennsylvania
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thats really good....i feel the same way about someone too...it's deep too it shows how you feel about this one person!!! great job. :)

thebest BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 1:52 pm
thebest BRONZE, Egg Harbor Township, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
indifference to evil is evil-Elie Wiesel

You are really good.

I LOVE THIS ONE.

You have a talent for this you should write a book

on Feb. 22 2010 at 8:32 am
babyboo8810 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
20 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
live your life and never give up

i love this one

on Feb. 9 2010 at 6:14 pm
greenleaf_floating BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Purgatory, he thought, was just a synonym for tomorrow."
-Second Glance

I like this...how you convey the fact that while you dont want to, you can't help being in love with this person. It's a very relatable poem.

Awsomeness said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 3:06 pm
This is a great poem but its lust not love you care about him but its not love its lust

on Nov. 13 2009 at 2:42 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1028 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 4:19 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
83 articles 0 photos 435 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Love it. The conflicting emotions and everything is just. . .sensational.

-Blessed Be!

+++ZERO+++

on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:23 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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I love this poem! It describes exactly how I feel.