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Mystery girl

March 23, 2015
By kayliee BRONZE, Cininnati, Ohio
kayliee BRONZE, Cininnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"And if you can't see anything beautiful about yourself, get a better mirror, look a little closer, stare a little longer because there's something inside you that made you keep trying, despite everyone who told you to quit..'they were wrong'.


You watch as she tries to get up,
Trying to recover from their fun and games.
The fear in her eyes staring back at you,
She's the opening act on stage.

Watch as she struggles,
The audience doesn't seem to mind.
Maybe you should help her?
All your fears begin to unwind

Everybody's laughing,
She must be having fun.
You watch her eyes once again,
Maybe you should tell someone.

It's too late,
The curtains begin to close,
The lights are fading,
And your thoughts begin to compose.

You want to warn her, and tell her she's so special,
That she's not alone,
That you too were once part of their show,
But her identity is left unknown.

Up next is the misfits- the clowns,
They make their way on stage.
You see sparks of uniqueness,
But with the help of the audience the sparks begin to fade.

The color that was previously filling the auditorium,
Transforms to a deep grey.
You now see her,
Her pain-like yours, forced away.

Her rosy red cheeks,
Now but a ghostly pale,
Her beautiful smile,
Lost as the result of betrayal.

She is nonetheless beautiful as before,
None less amazing,
But none less different,
Her streak of individuality is quickly breaking.

She was losing herself as an effect of their childish games,
She needed hope; she needed somebody.
You were the one she needed in a million ways.

You were the one she needed when they pushed her down,
You were the one when they said she wasn't worth it.
You were needed when her differentness was being ripped away,
Only a few words you needed to say.

But you were hiding,
Scared of what they may think.
If you had only said
What her thoughts and yours interlink.

You again watch her in the crowd,
You can't turn away from the clear pain in her eyes,
She’s hurting,
As you now notice her insecurities you’re mesmerized.

You watch as she tries to get up,
Trying to recover from their fun.
The fear in her eyes staring back at you,
You have to tell her she's not the only one.

She sees you coming,
Partially happy, partially scared,
Crossed arms, dazed eyes.
She thought no one cared.

You start to get closer,
Breathing much too hard,
Reaching out to touch her,
Eyes closed not to catch her off guard.

You feel something hard, cold, and flat stop your hand,
Where did she go?
You open your eyes slowly,
You see her,
Her insecurities you already know.

You see the pain in her eyes,
The scars on her wrist,
The dimples on your cheeks,
And your smile you dearly missed.


The author's comments:

If having trouble grasping the end, heres some help: The cold, flat, hard object is a mirror. 

I went through bullying at my previous school, to the point where I felt completely alone and worthless. But, I perervered. In this poem, there is a girl, and the girls future-self. 

When you begin reading the poem, you don't realize that the 2 different people are one person until you reach the end when it is made clear. In the end, the girl reaches out to touch her old self and finds only a mirror. Opening her eyes, she sees herself. 

After knowing this, you can re-read the poem and understand the two parts much deeper. 

I wrote this to inspire bully victims to keep pushing, stand up for themself, and know that things will get better...I promise. 


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on Apr. 11 2015 at 10:25 am
Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"We look forward to the time when the power of love will replace the love of power then will our world know the blessings of peace" William Ewart Gladstone

Theres kids in elementry school that can go. I really think you should look into it. Itll help you get a good idea of what other writers do and different styles. Just an idea:)

on Apr. 11 2015 at 10:25 am
Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
9 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We look forward to the time when the power of love will replace the love of power then will our world know the blessings of peace" William Ewart Gladstone

Theres kids in elementry school that can go. I really think you should look into it. Itll help you get a good idea of what other writers do and different styles. Just an idea:)

on Apr. 11 2015 at 10:25 am
Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
9 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We look forward to the time when the power of love will replace the love of power then will our world know the blessings of peace" William Ewart Gladstone

Theres kids in elementry school that can go. I really think you should look into it. Itll help you get a good idea of what other writers do and different styles. Just an idea:)

on Apr. 11 2015 at 10:25 am
Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
9 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We look forward to the time when the power of love will replace the love of power then will our world know the blessings of peace" William Ewart Gladstone

Theres kids in elementry school that can go. I really think you should look into it. Itll help you get a good idea of what other writers do and different styles. Just an idea:)

on Apr. 11 2015 at 10:25 am
Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
9 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We look forward to the time when the power of love will replace the love of power then will our world know the blessings of peace" William Ewart Gladstone

Theres kids in elementry school that can go. I really think you should look into it. Itll help you get a good idea of what other writers do and different styles. Just an idea:)

Cmwasl SILVER said...
on Apr. 11 2015 at 12:21 am
Cmwasl SILVER, Vancouver, District Of Columbia
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Wow, this is a very powerful poem. I'm glad you managed to persevere through the bullying. Brilliant C:

kayliee BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2015 at 11:28 pm
kayliee BRONZE, Cininnati, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And if you can't see anything beautiful about yourself, get a better mirror, look a little closer, stare a little longer because there's something inside you that made you keep trying, despite everyone who told you to quit..'they were wrong'.

No I haven't, I don't know much about them and I also think I may be too young. (8th grade)

on Apr. 10 2015 at 11:26 pm
Hatchetlover4eva SILVER, Phillips, Maine
9 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We look forward to the time when the power of love will replace the love of power then will our world know the blessings of peace" William Ewart Gladstone

love this...have you ever thought about going into a poetry slam competition? because this is amazing work..

on Apr. 10 2015 at 5:23 pm
Vaati-Picori SILVER, Tuscaloosa, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"It's much harder dealing with the living. Give me a ghost to talk to any day."Roy Mustang

“Kids these days. They think it’s a competition to have the most friends. One is enough. Find someone completely unique.” Yato Noragami

*cries silently* wonderfully sad

on Apr. 9 2015 at 11:06 pm
dizzypotato_202, San Bernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Your anger is like the bubbles in a can of soda. The more you're shaken, the more you want to let it all out. The longer you keep it in though, the greater the size of the eventual explosion- and the flatter the drink at the end." -Linkin Park

Beautiful. Absolutely Amazing