Fragile | Teen Ink


February 28, 2009
By ElizabethS. PLATINUM, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
ElizabethS. PLATINUM, Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
32 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Dreams like soap bubbles
Swirling colors and pictures
Floating around and drifting away
Until they simply disappear

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on May. 23 2009 at 9:37 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.


EdytD SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2009 at 1:54 am
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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i like the imagery; even though it's short, you effectively manage to relay a lot of feeling. I also like the strong comparisons you give to achieve the desired effect. ;)