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Dark Angel
March 7, 2009
A beautiful creature
Who i love
But i evil
A dark angel
A creature
That has stolen my heart
And will most likely rip it open
And feast apon it's insides
But i don't mind
Because it's still her
And it's my choice
To hand over my heart
To the
Dark Angel
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Favorite Quote:
“God, of your goodness, give me yourself; you are enough for me, and anything less that I could ask for would not do you full honour. And if I ask anything that is less, I shall always lack something, but in you alone I have everything”
consider the phrase: "Will most likely rip it open" THe phrase kinda sticks out among the other imagery.
what about something like:
"and is destined to rip it apart"? It adds rhyming and flow.
Just a suggestion, keep up the good work! :]