Unnoticed | Teen Ink


March 10, 2009
By Sasha-Bear PLATINUM, Lockhart, Texas
Sasha-Bear PLATINUM, Lockhart, Texas
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Dressed in all black; a ribbon in my hair. I'm sitting in the corner facing my despair. Shes lying there; going unnoticed. Dead in an instant; dying for a year. Her eyes blank but angry, solemn and empty. Will they ever notice she's lying there? Screaming voices, no choice, a slap in the face. She called out but no one answered and now shes lying there, dressed in all black with a ribbon in her hair, nothing to do but sit, drenched in her despair.

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on Mar. 24 2009 at 12:00 am
lexikeys247 SILVER, Forks, Washington
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amazing enough said

on Mar. 21 2009 at 1:17 am
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

this has to be my favorite one of yours. very good.