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my heart

March 21, 2009
By lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
14 articles 19 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem is, you think you have time.


My heart was
So fair, so true
Until I met you
You took your clumsy hands
And broke it
It's torn and sore
Everyday I feel it tear even more
Day by day
Second by second
There's so many holes and cracks
My heart beat's like a tack
My heart
Is so torn and sore


The author's comments:
i was inspired by this piece becuase of heartbreak

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on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:37 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

This is amazing and relatable!

lamelola GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2010 at 5:24 pm
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
14 articles 19 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem is, you think you have time.

Thank you :)

on Aug. 15 2010 at 6:13 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
34 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

Nice one. I think a lot of people can relate. (;