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Alone

April 1, 2009
By EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Sitting in the kitchen, silent

but for the steady hum of the fridge,

resting upon the chair: my back upon its back,

my arms resting on its arms.


Over-burdened counters sagging with packages

Unattended to, forgotten and left.

the voices in the background, fading in and out.

Doors slamming with a sense of finality.


The melancholy, yet melodious beeping of the machines

As they run through their simple cycles.

Besides this, the kitchen is silent, silent and sad.

As I sit on the hard chair, staring out into nothing.


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EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 9:08 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Thanks!

Given that I write while I am either angry or upset, most of my poems do tend to have a gloomy feel, and many of them are about being alone.

Mikal SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 6:36 am
Mikal SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Hey EdytD! Wow! I love how you used personification in this poem! I personally hardly feel alone. It clearly shows in this poem you had ur share of lonely times!

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2009 at 4:42 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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lol most people aren't in the kitchen at the time - the preferred place seems to be bedroom or somewhere slightly more comfortable. i originally wrote this for a writing course, actually, (the requirements were that it had to be about a kitchen) but i really liked it, so i put it on teenink.

on Apr. 13 2009 at 2:28 pm
CrowOfRuination PLATINUM, Lawrence, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
You cannot be lonely if you like the person you're alone with. -Wayne Dyer
Leading those who have followed a greater leader without knowing what it is you are doing is the same as wielding a sword against a master of weapons. -Kreepy

I know what it is like to be alone. This ddescribes that feeling exactly, though for me it may be in a different place than in the kitchen, however, this is a very good piece or work.