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Your My Inspiration

April 1, 2009
By Zachary12220 GOLD, Hamburg, New York
Zachary12220 GOLD, Hamburg, New York
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You’re my warmth, you’re my cold.
You’re my young, you’re my old.
You’re my tired and my restless,
You’re my love uncontested.
You’re my angel from up above.
There is no doubt,
You’re my true love.
You’re my sheath, you’re my sword.
When I speak, you’re my words.
You’re my strength, you’re my power.
You’re my every second, my every hour.
You’re my bullet, you’re my gun.
You protect me when I am shunned.
You’re the vest upon my chest.
You’re my all, my very best.
Our love is unconditional,
People say our love is fictional.
But it’s true.
I love you.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Dec. 12 2010 at 8:19 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

I'd be curious to know if the person this was writtin about liked it as much as these other fliberty ibits. I mean commenters.

on May. 4 2009 at 1:58 am
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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who is this lucky girl that you're writing about ?

just out of curiosity ;)

on Apr. 10 2009 at 9:58 pm
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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ohhh, that poem was so sweet! I loved it. The whole thing just fits together. Good job!!!

on Apr. 9 2009 at 8:27 pm
Author_ConstantineSeries GOLD, Richmond, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“Reading without thinking is nothing, for a book is less important for what it says than for what it makes you think.”

wow i really like it, it's really sweet. i love the repititiin, and the rhyming is good too. You have a really cool writing style, keep going, and see my poem too please : )