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The Architect MAG
April 5, 2009
Take everything I have ever made and run it through me. Let me soak up
every bitter emotion. Let's pray I make it to the hospital, so as doctors and
nurses “tsk” and task I can discover that I don't want to be
stitched back up, I don't want to be saved. No.
I want to be made into
an example.
“Look” they will say,
“Come see.”
“Look.”
“Come see.”
© Susannah B., Greenwich, CT
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This article has 43 comments.
traveler said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 12:37 pm
I think I like this one more and more. Very clever use of language.
poet24 said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 12:29 pm
i admire your poems greatly
johnmason said...
on Apr. 27 2009 at 2:51 am
really cool.
This Guy said...
on Apr. 25 2009 at 10:12 pm
Very clever. Again, I'm impressed.
tiffanyp said...
on Apr. 25 2009 at 10:05 pm
really good poem. i can hear you screm
Will said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 11:12 pm
Yes, this speaks to me
Random415 said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 12:08 pm
we all experience times when we feel like giving up. you present that situation well.
quixote said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 2:37 pm
this is a wonderful poem. can we see more?
anonymous123 said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 10:57 am
you are an example! great job
moonstone said...
on Apr. 22 2009 at 11:20 am
that is exactly how i feel....take a look.
porter said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:38 am
Amazing...
Donny said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:32 am
I like the way you repeat important phrases in your poems. Come see, come see...Great
spicy lady said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:23 am
I love this poem. I wish it were a bit longer. Perhaps in time you could add to the poem so we get to know more about your architect.
marilyn222 said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:12 am
Still think this is the best yet.
ronjon said...
on Apr. 20 2009 at 12:12 am
Way to go Matt. A great piece.
andyr said...
on Apr. 20 2009 at 12:03 am
Nice job man.
desilu said...
on Apr. 19 2009 at 2:35 pm
i love this. the way you repeat the line “come see†is awesome.
marilyn222 said...
on Apr. 17 2009 at 10:30 pm
For me the best yet. Hope to see more by you.
Victorious said...
on Apr. 17 2009 at 3:47 pm
...i got chills reading this. you have achieved rhythm, and that's a very cool thing.
UJ said...
on Apr. 17 2009 at 3:29 pm
Matt,
Can certainly write poetry. Found his writing very intelligent and thought provoking. A little on the dark side, but that's part of life; the world isn't "peaches and cream", especially with the world situation today. Keep on writing Matt.
Can certainly write poetry. Found his writing very intelligent and thought provoking. A little on the dark side, but that's part of life; the world isn't "peaches and cream", especially with the world situation today. Keep on writing Matt.
