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Hiding places

October 5, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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I build hiding places
out of sands of change
and then I hide among them
out of heart breaks range

I'll be the last one standing
in my hiding place of gold
and while your heart is breaking
my little heart will hold

I don't think you can see me
(But then, I could be wrong)
while I hide on sandy walls
and let life go along

© Tori W., Victoria, BC, Canada

The author's comments:
The walls represent how you hide yourself to protect from heartbreak.. interpret it how you like, it's more fun that way
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pinkypromise23 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 4:54 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

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soo good(: you are an amazing writer!