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Fabrication

December 14, 2009
By Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
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Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I am Happy to The Point of Fear" -Ralph Waldo Emmerson

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Your hands hold the needles,
I am the recreation,
You pinch and pull and twist me,
Make a new sensation.

Make me what I am now,
With every ache and pain,
You give me a new patern,
but what have I to gain?

THis fabric does not suit me,
Its boring and its bland,
The texture of an iron clasp,
The color of dampened sand..

Sew me back together,
Put the pieced back in place,
Make a few adjustments,
Just touch up my face

Fix everything about me,
You think should be changed,
Stick that needle, sew me up...
Leave me, so rearranged.

© Alicia W., Bonita Springs, FL

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meaghanm2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 16 2014 at 4:39 pm
meaghanm2 BRONZE, Congers, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Freedom is not worth having if it does not include the freedom to make mistakes.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> ~Mahatma Gandhi~

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Your use of imagery and metaphor is absolutely exquisite! I love your writing and hope to read more of it soon!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 6:56 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

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Its boring and its bland—I found this line a bit hard to understand because I wasn't sure if the its was possessive or a contraction. Either way, the poem is well executed. Congrats on the Editors' Choice. Great title!
Lucy4himnotu ELITE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 10:31 pm
Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
148 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am Happy to The Point of Fear&quot; -Ralph Waldo Emmerson

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Thank you :) I am glad to see you understand my writing :)
HPGGMRAR GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 9:28 pm
HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
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&quot;I musn&#039;t forget I&#039;m alive.&quot;<br /> Ray Bradbury (Dandelion Wine)

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Woah, that was really cool. There are so many messages hidden in this, but it is still concise and poinant.