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What about me?

April 12, 2010
By Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts


Not caring is your shield
For all wounds left unhealed
You say the only thing that matters is the end
Because then you will again be with your best friend
You’re just waiting around for a restful eternity
But what about me?

Years of pain have left you feeling disrespected
But now those who care about you are being rejected
You’re sorry you can’t be perfect you say
Yet your imperfections are not the cause of dismay
Not being part of our future you think is the key
But what about me?

I thought I would be able to count on you
But I can no longer deal with what you put me through
Trying to help make the future brighter was my objective
Yet you don’t seem to be able to see my perspective
You don’t want to try due to fear of incapability
But what about me?

When argued with you have a temper that will explode
And with it all of your relationships are bound to implode
The pain you’ve caused me I am unable to explain
For I don’t understand what your words were suppose to gain
You say I misunderstood but I think I finally see
You don’t really care about me.


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on May. 16 2010 at 4:52 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

I love teh depth of this, and how alot of people can relate. Awesome!

on May. 8 2010 at 8:55 am
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

Thank you so much! Take a look at some of my other work if you get a chance and tell me what you think.

on May. 7 2010 at 2:34 pm
chargertien GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
14 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life sucks and is unfair. But when a melody dances in the wind, stop and enjoy the peacefulness.

You made the rhyming seem effortless. Five Stars. Keep on keeping on, and you'll do just fine as a writer