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The Worst Mistake

February 7, 2012
By ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Coute que coute(Cost What It May)


Selfish;
That was the word that came to her mind.
The word runs through her head.
Peace was all she wanted to find.
Now she chooses to be dead.
Then another word came to her mind...
Mistake;
A mistake to take her own life.
She only wanted to be loved.
Now she meant to end all the strife.
When I found her crying,
Lying in a pool of blood,
I also found her dying.
When her life left her,
I was holding her tight.
She was such a sad girl.
Forever filled with fright.
She had never considered the word that came to my mind...
Love;
I felt it for her every day.
My heart was filled pain.
I could fall into her beautiful eyes.
But now I have gone insane.
But now no person, no object, and my last goodbyes.
I cried out to heaven above.
A selfish mistake that ended my love.


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on May. 20 2014 at 6:15 pm
ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
20 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Coute que coute(Cost What It May)

thank you...this is true for me..which is why i aint so good at the love thing...

on May. 20 2014 at 4:50 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Actually made me cry a littl. This is just....Unfathomably great!

on Oct. 5 2012 at 8:11 am
Yourboggert1 BRONZE, Welford, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
dark cannot drive out dark; only light can do that. hate cannot drive out hate; only love can do that.

that was beautiful! keep it up.

on Sep. 26 2012 at 7:48 am
PaperWriter SILVER, Cornwall, Other
7 articles 8 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
'When the first baby laughed for the first time, that laugh broke into a thousand pieces and they all went skipping about, and that was the beginning of fairies.' - J.M.Barrie

I like this poem - it is so sad, yet you have written it beautifully. You have a talent - keep it up! :)