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Lovin Hurt

May 19, 2014
By Lialuvz SILVER, Marshville, North Carolina
Lialuvz SILVER, Marshville, North Carolina
6 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's a million of us just like me
Who dress like me
Walk,talk and act like me
They might just be the next best thing but not quite me
-Eminem


My body greeting the wall
Knuckles address my jaw
Pain erupts from my nose dressed in scarlet
My wounded eyes gazing at my darlin
His oblivion to my pain
Later his gorgeous eyes cloud with shame
He wipes my pain away
Between his lips are promises to change
My love never meant to hurt me
It's not his fault
He tells me to believe
Believe in us
Have some trust
I view my reflection with one eye
The other wears a dark cloak
I dry my face
He doesn't like it when i cry
My family and friends question our love
But they dont understand
What it takes to really love a man
When im older one day
We'll pack our stuff and run away
He loves me
The reason i know
Is because he told me so
I cant breathe
Bruises on my neck
I can't see
My vision is a speck
Beating
Screaming
I can't bear the pain
Running
Leaving
This place in vain
Falling
Crawling
Back once again



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on May. 20 2014 at 6:37 pm
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work
-Minho in "To The Beautiful You"

oh my goodness this piece took my breath away

Lialuvz SILVER said...
on May. 20 2014 at 6:19 pm
Lialuvz SILVER, Marshville, North Carolina
6 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's a million of us just like me
Who dress like me
Walk,talk and act like me
They might just be the next best thing but not quite me
-Eminem

Thank you so much this is my first time putting somthing up so I appreciate it.

HudaZav SILVER said...
on May. 20 2014 at 1:42 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

wow brilliant piece, this really got to me. The emotions, pain, love, it is all displayed perfectly. Good work!