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Dark Water
I dive into the smooth, silky surface
My body freezes and trembles
The water swallows me like a shark that's found its prey
I try to find a way out
The water swishes and swirls around me
Slowly I sink deeper and deeper
All of the fight in me has drowned
The only thing left is my will to survive
Soon I am alone
I have hit the bottom of the lake
Nobody is around me
It's dark and cold
Colder than ice
I urge for one last breath of air
I try to regain my feet and stand up
I slip and fall
All goes dark
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