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My Unknown Love

October 11, 2018
By samivv BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
samivv BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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My unknown love is someone who is caring, athletic, humble

With a beautiful voice and features of a god

He awes me everytime I see him

Deep brown mysterious eyes with hair curlier than a curly fry

His love, his character, his smile, irreplaceable


My unknown love was my first real friend

His courage impressed me when he asked me to play on the playground

creative ideas that no other boy could ever have

Imagination that others dreamed of having

His energy, his snacks, his cooties,irreplaceable


My unknown love has created memories

Memories I will remember beyond the end of time

Every second we spend is filled with laughter

The thought of spending the rest of my life with him make me smile from ear to ear

His kisses,his hugs,his passion, irreplaceable


My unknown love is someone I see myself growing old with

Through thick and thin our amor will last

An everlasting friendship that grows to a love that will last to infinity

His grey hairs,his wrinkles, his last breath, irreplaceable


The author's comments:

This poem is written to the future love of my life.


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on Jan. 24 at 11:23 am
Patrickalvarez1, Montrose, Colorado
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Fire fire

on Nov. 1 2023 at 3:27 pm
Self-Scarred BRONZE, Temecula, California
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yessssss

TyRitter said...
on Oct. 10 2023 at 10:31 am
TyRitter, 60503, Illinois
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hello

on Feb. 25 2023 at 6:34 pm
foreverandeverandmorever SILVER, Mount Pleasant, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"A girl should be a butterfly. Pretty to see, but hard to catch,"
Don't know who wrote this.

So good, I can feel the emotion, in your writing. Hope you post more!

on Oct. 28 2022 at 5:33 pm
Lolarosemary1 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Somedays I need the music & somedays I need the lyrics." - Author Unknown

I can feel your love. I hope I find someone like that one day too.

TAE123465 said...
on Jun. 16 2022 at 2:37 pm
TAE123465, Rock Hill, South Carolina
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This is a fantastic poem. I never related to a poem this much its like me writing down my thoughts on how i feel with my love. You're a really great poem writer and i would absolutely love to read more of your poems. This poem makes me imagine/think the things that you wrote about in this poem. The poem itself is gorgeous because its like youre pouring out you feelings and being creative all in a poem, I LOVEEE ITT

leijla30 said...
on May. 5 2022 at 3:46 pm
leijla30, West Des Moines, Iowa
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This is a really good poem and I enjoyed reading this poem and it was very good to read i would love for you to post more!!

on Feb. 10 2022 at 3:18 pm
Amaya_ohara12, America, Arizona
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Htis poem is really heart taking and I well read it again. Great job its really good!!

on Dec. 13 2021 at 7:46 pm
TTV-CleverKiller-YT, Concord, New Hampshire
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This poem has a sweet meaning to it and I love how you described this in the poem and near the end

MiaHilst said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:44 pm
MiaHilst, Davidson, North Carolina
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I thought the imagery in this poem was amazing because I could imagine exactly how this boy's facial features look. The emotion I felt because I liked the idea that her soul is aching for his and that's how true love should feel.

asriram said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:36 pm
asriram, Concord, North Carolina
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This poem uses so much imagery that I can image what he looks like. I really like the deep descriptions.

Maggie_gross said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:34 pm
Maggie_gross, Huntersville, North Carolina
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This poem is really sweet. I like how the author gives me a lot of details for me to create an image of what he looks like in his head.

kamrynhaynes said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 1:48 pm
kamrynhaynes, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"life is what you make of it." - my dad

This poem is extremely sweet. I love how by the end of the poem, you feel as if you traveled through the whole love story. I also enjoy the fact that this speaks of growing old with someone, and not abandoning them. This poem makes me fantasize about having someone like this for me one day.

Se-O BRONZE said...
on May. 12 2021 at 7:19 am
Se-O BRONZE, Anyang, Other
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This is reall sweet!!

on Apr. 11 2021 at 12:25 pm
incomplete_aesthete BRONZE, Mooresville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
time waits for no one, but there's beauty in the moment
- 'bon iver' by mxmtoon

this is so sweet :')

JC12 said...
on Mar. 28 2021 at 12:47 am
JC12, St. Paul, Minnesota
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Lovely!

on Dec. 23 2020 at 1:12 am
Thepotatoe BRONZE, Wylie, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how hard life can be, your always going to get through it!

I absolutely love it!

on Dec. 14 2020 at 6:05 am
darel_aranovski, Fair Oaks, California
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so beautiful)

mgaspar1123 said...
on Dec. 1 2020 at 12:52 pm
mgaspar1123, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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I thought this was really good because when I read it, I thought of one person the whole time and I didn't know that I would've had someone in mind. I just really liked the emotions it gave me as I read it. It's very lovely to read.

Klair said...
on Oct. 15 2020 at 11:44 am
Klair, Altoona, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Wrong will be right, when Aslan comes in sight. At the sound of his roar, sorrows will be no more, when he bares his teeth, winter meets its death, and when he shakes his mane, we shall have spring again.
-C.S. Lewis, The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

This is beautiful. It makes me want to cry and laugh at the same time. It makes me feel something and that is what writing and art are all about, this is amazing!!