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Black Night MAG

April 20, 2009
By BookWorm579 PLATINUM, Elk Grove, California
BookWorm579 PLATINUM, Elk Grove, California
26 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"à cœur vaillant rien d’impossible [nothing is impossible to a willing heart]" -French Proverb


Silent beating
A hidden, frozen heart
Summer birds
A flock glides through Winter
Black Night shapes.

Crescent scythe
Reaper's ancient dagger
Sliver moon
A knife's mirror edge
Black Night shapes.

Deep purring
A shifting nighttime herd
Black-emerald trees
Nocturnal giants move in half-sleep
Black Night shapes.

Soon the disaster of Light
The warriors of Yellow Day will come
Death approaches
The elegance and mystery
Of Black Night will die
And her countless phantoms will
Perish alongside her.



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on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:42 pm
sedaracapri BRONZE, Columbus, New Jersey
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i meant me and you really do write alike. sorry

on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:42 pm
sedaracapri BRONZE, Columbus, New Jersey
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Wow. Me and you really do write alot. We use repetition to further get our point across. You should definetly keep writing and never stop. Also, it would be great if you checked out my poems.. well poem.. there's only one. the others are still pending for approval and what not. thanks(:

on Dec. 26 2009 at 7:54 pm
SerenityMine BRONZE, Not Saying, California
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Whoa. Good job. I don't know what else to say about that. Lol. :)

on Dec. 8 2009 at 3:16 pm
ThereIsAlwaysHope GOLD, Belfast, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'Miles to go before I sleep'
- Robert Frost

excellent. i love it [:

on Dec. 7 2009 at 3:05 pm
Reaa.Mae.Kuzyk GOLD, Arborg, Manitoba, Other
13 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why live trying to just DIE, when people are DYING just for the chance to LIVE."
-Anomynous

"Time has a wonderful way of showing us what really matters."
- Margaret Peters

Btw, dnt worry about the "Mr.Squid" part. It means goodstuff where I come from. :)

on Dec. 7 2009 at 3:04 pm
Reaa.Mae.Kuzyk GOLD, Arborg, Manitoba, Other
13 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why live trying to just DIE, when people are DYING just for the chance to LIVE."
-Anomynous

"Time has a wonderful way of showing us what really matters."
- Margaret Peters

Well, hey there Mr.Squid.

I loved your poem, keep up the good work! :D

Love, Reaa~!

on Dec. 6 2009 at 4:42 pm
EvalinaXElectric BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
2 articles 5 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes good-bye is a second chance"

This is really good (: I love it