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That Ring

April 30, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Feeling lonely and sad,

Wondering why I'm bad.

All I do is cry and shout,

Please let me out.

I'm feeling guilty all the time,

When paranoia and anxiety,

Is my only crime.

Mom loves me shouldn't she?

Yes but sadly she hides behind,

The one she's dating at the time.

Now I'm left with my dad,

But he is far away,

Can't help me when I feel this way.

Call you say but you got it wrong,

Mom won't allow that ring to come.


The author's comments:

This features the hardships of life and how you could be left feeling alone and isolated when you feel that life has no meaning anymore and you are guilty because you take it out on others. 


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on Nov. 11 2021 at 12:45 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks and your fine, have a nice day!

on Nov. 9 2021 at 8:10 pm
ForgottenEcho SILVER, San Diego, California
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
When written in Chinese, the word 'crisis' is composed of two characters. One represents danger and the other represents opportunity.

Oops sorry posted that twice xD

on Nov. 9 2021 at 8:09 pm
ForgottenEcho SILVER, San Diego, California
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
When written in Chinese, the word 'crisis' is composed of two characters. One represents danger and the other represents opportunity.

This is beautiful! Gave me the chills. I absolutely LOVE your style.

on Nov. 9 2021 at 8:09 pm
ForgottenEcho SILVER, San Diego, California
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
When written in Chinese, the word 'crisis' is composed of two characters. One represents danger and the other represents opportunity.

This is beautiful! Gave me the chills. I absolutely LOVE your style.

on May. 7 2021 at 10:16 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thank you!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 7 2021 at 9:29 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 963 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

Thanks, I will help!

on May. 7 2021 at 7:31 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

@Lydiaq Hey, if it's okay with you could you also work with me on my poems? They're average right now but I want to learn how to make them better and after reading your work (And the fact that you've actually responded but mainly based on your work) I think you're the person I should talk to.

on May. 7 2021 at 7:24 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Yeah, I do get a little bad at that but I will definitely work on it, thanks for the advice.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 6 2021 at 6:12 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 963 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

Hey, I luve your ideas, but maybe u could work on the punctuation and rhyme, especially at the end:}

on May. 4 2021 at 7:37 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks again!

on May. 4 2021 at 2:13 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
197 articles 22 photos 1039 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

wait wait wait. youve been on ti for 4 days and you've gotten 7 things thru? i was on ti for 7 months when I started to get stuff thru and my friends been on even longer and she still hasn't got stuff thru. lucky...
if your actually experiencing this, get help. but aside from that, cool poem