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The Sun Rises

May 22, 2021
By WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 160 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me


I wake up

 

And see a flower

So Pretty

So sweet

 

I see a thistle

Sharp

On the outside

Soft on the inside

 

I see the sky

Always there

Steadfast

True

 

I see the water

As it flows

It leaves me behind

yet

I couldn't live without it

 

I see the trees

They look so calm, so still, so green

But in a storm

they strike back

They howl

they thrash

they shake

they fall

 

And

I see

me

Who am I?

 

No one's perfect.

 

Just be the best you.


The author's comments:

I did this for school. I never though I could be good at poetry. I guess I just never tried. I'm not even sure this is good. Please leave a comment. (Constructive critisism is welcome). Thx for reading.


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on Aug. 21 2021 at 10:36 am
Itsmaanya_25 GOLD, Indore, Other
19 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's Okay to have butterflies in your stomach, as long as you make them fly in formation

You really know how to convey big thoughts in little words!

on Aug. 20 2021 at 8:28 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
197 articles 22 photos 1039 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

(moonloit wolves, i mean)

on Aug. 20 2021 at 8:28 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
197 articles 22 photos 1039 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

ohhh pretty

on Aug. 20 2021 at 5:00 am
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
27 articles 0 photos 268 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is something infinitely healing in the repeated refrains of nature—the assurance that dawn comes after night, and spring after winter. —Rachel Carson

I really like the calmness to this, and how it demonstrates that everything and everyone has a good side, even if you can't always see it. ❤️

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Jul. 26 2021 at 9:40 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 963 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

Short lines! My favorite!

on Jul. 22 2021 at 5:50 pm
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 160 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

@SparrowSun

Yes, that's what i was going for :D

I've been thinking about having a different name. What do you think about "Moonlight_Wolves"?

on May. 28 2021 at 9:40 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
197 articles 22 photos 1039 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

thats calming