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Lost love

August 13, 2021
By margaretjames268 BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
margaretjames268 BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"We are products of our past, but we don't have to be prisoners of it." - Rick Warren
"Someone is sitting in the shade today because someone planted a tree a long time ago." - Warren Buffett


Lodged at the end of a mountain pass

Is a mansion with a greenhouse on its left.

A garden path where lovers walked

Now full of weeds and neglect.

 


The gate swings open on rusty hinges,

And thunder peals far off.

The night is cloudy and cold,

Not the first that house has known.

 


At the entrance to the greenhouse

A pair of hedge clippers leans against the glass.

Cobwebs between the handles, 

Rusted and unused blades.

 


Those clippers were left by the gardener boy

As his lover beckoned him to take a walk.

Laughing, he set them down, took her hand and followed her

Down the since neglected garden path.

 


That evening after sunset, a storm brewed in the East.

Chasing the sun down to bed as it advanced.

Lightning struck, thunder pealed, and the river rose.

On that river bed, the lovers lay asleep and then dead.

 


That house is now believed to be haunted

By friends and family, far and near.

It knows no longer the laughter in cool spring air.

No longer does the gardener boy stroll in the garden with his love.

 


On this dark night, a storm brewing,

The house wails and creaks in the wind.

For it knows it’s time has come,

For the river will rise.


The author's comments:

At the moment, I am sitting and looking out my bedroom window at the fourth thunderstorm in a row. And, in my opinion, the most magnificent one.


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on Aug. 14 2021 at 10:59 pm
margaretjames268 BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are products of our past, but we don't have to be prisoners of it." - Rick Warren
"Someone is sitting in the shade today because someone planted a tree a long time ago." - Warren Buffett

@toliveg7 Thanks :)

Oh well... typo XD

on Aug. 14 2021 at 10:28 pm
toliveg7 SILVER, Charlottesville, Virginia
5 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life doesn't give you seatbelts!"-Batman, The Lego Movie
“Never close your lips to those whom you have already opened your heart.”--Charles Dickens

I love the story, the pace, the alliteration, of this. Lovely! Keep it up. :) <33