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Unknown

September 15, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


I shatter and break,
Shiver and shake,
My smile is a fake.
My stories untold,
My glasses unfold.
Let me tell you,
About a girl,
I once knew.
She shined like a star,
Missions to mars,
Pretty too.
What ever happened,
To that smart kid,
I look in the water,
And I know what she did.


The author's comments:

This poem explains the feeling of discomfort in your own skin, how when we feel so small and so sad we forget who we are, lose sight of what matters. Please comment!


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on Oct. 26 2021 at 7:24 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

When you submit work of course

on Oct. 26 2021 at 7:23 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks, I will be sure to comment on yours as well.

Lida28 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 26 2021 at 12:14 pm
Lida28 BRONZE, Thessaloniki, Other
2 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Respect your mothers, everyone.

Oh my God WolvesRain......your poem is awesome.......congratulations.

on Oct. 19 2021 at 7:08 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks! Again, thanks for the comments, it always brings a smile to my face.

on Oct. 18 2021 at 1:00 pm
ForgottenEcho SILVER, San Diego, California
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
When written in Chinese, the word 'crisis' is composed of two characters. One represents danger and the other represents opportunity.

Oh my gosh . . . This was beautiful! I loved the language you used--your writing literally gave me the chills. xD

on Oct. 15 2021 at 3:01 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

All the comments keep me going so thank you all!

on Oct. 15 2021 at 3:01 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks! I am crying with joy right now!

on Oct. 14 2021 at 10:18 am
francezfeelz BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
4 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, you say "it is what it is" and move on - Jake Duncan (a best friend who I won't forget and I can't wait to reconnect with so if you're out there I hope you're ok <3 ily)

@WolvesRain thank you for giving this world a relatable piece this is such an art! love this you are so talented! <3

on Oct. 9 2021 at 10:05 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks! I love all the comments, it's really appreciated.

on Oct. 9 2021 at 10:01 am
WolfGurl PLATINUM, Not A Real Place, Indiana
20 articles 5 photos 160 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened. –Anatole France.

A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than you love yourself. –Josh Billings

Men are from Earth, women are from Earth. Deal with it.- George Carlin

A nation that destroys its soils destroys itself. Forests are the lungs of our land, purifying the air and giving fresh strength to our people. —Franklin D. Roosevelt

Never lose. Either win, or learn. - Me

Wow, cool! I really like how this piece just seems to kind of flow.

on Oct. 6 2021 at 3:58 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
196 articles 22 photos 1038 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

good job!

on Oct. 6 2021 at 1:38 pm
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks for the comments! Glad you enjoy my poems.

on Oct. 6 2021 at 12:09 am
WoodlandFairy BRONZE, Angels Camp, California
1 article 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"That there's some good in the world, Mr. Frodo, and its worth fighting for."





























Samwise Gamgee

That was really real, and I can relate to it a lot. Great job!!!

on Oct. 5 2021 at 11:26 pm
khrishakramanathan GOLD, Mumbai, Other
13 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a boomerang. It's up to you whether this intimidates you or empowers you.

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Oct. 1 2021 at 4:35 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 954 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

I sent over access, any ideas?

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Oct. 1 2021 at 4:35 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 954 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

As for the poem, yes, it's heartrending...great.

on Oct. 1 2021 at 10:41 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

I need access, just sent a request

on Oct. 1 2021 at 10:38 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks! I will reply on the doc soon

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Oct. 1 2021 at 10:16 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 954 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

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