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Hello: I’m Pain

October 26, 2021
By WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Once upon a time,
She looked into her,
Fathers eyes.
Once upon a time,
She was happy,
With life in her heart.
Once upon a time,
She didn’t cry,
She didn’t fake a smile.
Hello,
She says,
I’m pain,
I’m heartache,
I’m broken,
I’m dead.


The author's comments:

This is about looking back at your old life and asking, what happened? You think back to happiness, a family, a life, and say, where am I? Please comment!


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on Jan. 4 at 8:20 am
Lisa-Paul PLATINUM, Copenhagen, Other
22 articles 8 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
BeYOUtiful ✨

I love this, can't wait to read more!
-Lisa

on Nov. 3 2021 at 8:01 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks so much! I am so happy that my work is getting better!

on Nov. 2 2021 at 2:20 pm
francezfeelz BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
4 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, you say "it is what it is" and move on - Jake Duncan (a best friend who I won't forget and I can't wait to reconnect with so if you're out there I hope you're ok <3 ily)

wow @WolvesRain this should be editors choice I'm convinced

on Nov. 1 2021 at 8:01 am
WolvesRain ELITE, Walton, Kentucky
106 articles 1 photo 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks! I'm just thankful I already have two poems that are and around three or four short stories that are as well.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Oct. 31 2021 at 5:13 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
129 articles 33 photos 954 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, because you can’t love your way out of the lunatic asylum, but it makes it more fun to be a lunatic.
--Me

This should be editor's choice