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Loss

January 30, 2024
By Gottagethatbag BRONZE, Edmond, Oklahoma
Gottagethatbag BRONZE, Edmond, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Grief,I've learned is really just love. It's all the love you want to give but cannot. All that unspent love gathers up in the corners of your eyes, the lump in your throat, and in that hollow part in your chest. Grief Is just love with no place to go.”


Have you ever lost someone close to you

Lost someone who really matters

Someone who never failed to make you laugh

I have.

But what I really hate most,

Is that one person, that ONE person 

Who says,

I’M SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS

It feels cheap 

Like a dollar tree toy that breaks too easy

Like an arcade prize that’s kinda cheesy

Like a ball point pen that snaps when you open it

Like a shirt that doesn't fit quite right

Or a pair of shoes

 that’s just a little to tight

Like a burger without fries

As easy given like a cup with no lid

 I’M SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS

Those words need to be hid

Like fire on a trash bin

I give those words a goodbye bid

They won’t go

They won’t leave

So i’ll deal with it

Oh, well 

That’s my pet peeve

Like water down a drain

I wish it would leave.


The author's comments:

During the time I wrote this poem my aunt died of breast cancer. I just wrote what I was feeling and this is what came out.


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on Feb. 14 at 2:22 pm
Atuck1933 SILVER, Edmond, Oklahoma
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This is such a touching poem and is now one of my favorites. You are very talented and i appreciate your work. (Ali)

on Jan. 31 at 1:43 pm
Blongbaseballking BRONZE, Arcadia, Oklahoma
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wwwwwwww

on Jan. 31 at 12:16 pm
Weston122 BRONZE, Edmond, Ok, Oklahoma
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That is such a W poem

CaedenT BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 at 12:15 pm
CaedenT BRONZE, Edmond, Oklahoma
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W poem!

on Jan. 31 at 10:53 am
FDUNCAN96 BRONZE, Edmond, Oklahoma
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w's in the chattttttt