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Without You

August 30, 2009
By CarlyG GOLD, Emmaus, Pennsylvania
CarlyG GOLD, Emmaus, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let the odds keep you from doing what you know in your heart you were meant to do." H. Jackson Brown Jr.

I wish there was a way.
Some way for me to bridge the gap,
Yet you are so far away.
My hands can no longer feel your warmth.
I am cold without you.
My eyes can no longer see your beauty.
My vision is dull without you.
My ears can no longer hear your tone that lulls me to smile.
I no longer smile, without you.
I can no longer run into your arms and feel at home.
I can no longer gaze into the eyes that made my heart race.
You can no longer lift me up, above my nightmares.
I miss you.

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This article has 2 comments.

kirby~bug said...
on May. 19 2010 at 2:30 pm

i love it!!!!  B-E-A utifully written!!

reminds me of my best guy friend(cory) and me. when we started to feel things for each other it was cool and we just went w/ the flow of feelings but then he left and wont talk to me and i dont know why!!!:( but yes it is a great artical keep up the good work!!!

on Sep. 7 2009 at 1:26 pm
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 68 comments
I feel like this with this one guy in my class. He is amazing to me. But I don't think he sees me anymore since we broke up. Awesome job btw. keep writing.