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Sunday with the Family MAG

September 17, 2009
By Benjamin Bordelon BRONZE, Mandeville, Louisiana
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Uncle Ryan drinks his coffee.
Aunt Sherri smells of soap.
Cousin Joshua chews his bubblegum.
Gigi tries to cope.

My mother turns red laughing.
Alex tries to please.
Alan snaps his photos.
Nick tinkers on his keys.

George watches football.
Justin stuffs his face.
Trixie often barks.
Abby wears her lace.

Dinner with the clan.
Kisses good-bye on the cheek.
Although we hate to go our ways,
We’ll do it again next week!

© Lauren W., Ellicott City, MD

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beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:18 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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So cute sounds like Sundays with my own family! Great job--- it had me smiling and remembering:)
lizzyw77 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 14 2012 at 2:24 pm
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I love the rhyming and the repetition of this poem! Check out my stuff if you can :)
Ampersand GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 6:17 am
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That was so cool! I liked the way it was written; so rythmically and bouncy. It was great.
Lillian GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 4:45 pm
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"Gigi tries to cope."

Hmm..an interesting way to end the first verse! I love this poem.
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thats really cool
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Great! Loved the purposeful stanza formatting and subtle rhymes! Really good!
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this is really cute. good work!!