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Let Them In

September 21, 2009
By Farrahann SILVER, Front Royal, Virginia
Farrahann SILVER, Front Royal, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a dughter hideing my depression and sister makeing a good impression the girl next to you asking you to care a friend asking you to be there."


Cry,girl,cry
let it all go
let is out
let them see you at your weakest
let them know you are not as strong as you look
let them realize you are losing faith
don't hide it
you've been doing that long enough
stop hiding behind your smile
they need to know you have pain too!
they care, they do
but you can't open up
no matter what you try
you don't let the tears fall
no matter how much you want to
you're hiding too much
knock those four walls down
let them in
and girl
just let yourself cry



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on Nov. 15 2009 at 7:18 am
Farrahann SILVER, Front Royal, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a dughter hideing my depression and sister makeing a good impression the girl next to you asking you to care a friend asking you to be there."

thank you =)

Uncle & Aunt said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 8:34 pm
Nice poem. Shows depth of understanding. It is true, letting sad feelings out heals and helps us move on.

Sky said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 10:04 pm
Love it. Keep writing.

gramps said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 4:37 pm
nice poem, Farrah. I'm impressed!

Scott R said...
on Oct. 16 2009 at 8:54 pm
Wonderful Poem Farrah...So beautiful..

on Oct. 15 2009 at 5:00 pm
Farrahann SILVER, Front Royal, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a dughter hideing my depression and sister makeing a good impression the girl next to you asking you to care a friend asking you to be there."

thank you very much

gatmel21 said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 11:41 am
Great poem - very touching and moving. Great job!

marion said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 6:12 pm
Great Farrah. I am really impressed. You should write more.

rickard said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 2:24 pm
A great poem! Sad, but powerful at the same time. Let us see more "Ink" from you in the future.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 6:13 am
Farrahann SILVER, Front Royal, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a dughter hideing my depression and sister makeing a good impression the girl next to you asking you to care a friend asking you to be there."

thank you and i will try =)

on Oct. 10 2009 at 9:28 pm
jordanjanzen BRONZE, Saintjames, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Never fear shadows, they just mean theres a light in the distance casting it.

I aboslutley love this poem keep up the great work

on Sep. 29 2009 at 5:02 pm
Farrahann SILVER, Front Royal, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am a dughter hideing my depression and sister makeing a good impression the girl next to you asking you to care a friend asking you to be there."

thank you for the comment =)

on Sep. 28 2009 at 8:23 pm
Hugs-N-Kisses GOLD, Alta Vista, Kansas
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WOW, so amazing and truthful my favorite kind