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When I come To

October 3, 2009
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Of all the ones I’ve come to know
You’re the one I hate the most while your blast holds a steady flow
My grip is gnawed down to the bone
It takes my mind a second to blow
But it takes my guns a time to load
And although the path unfolds
It’s covered by dust and smoke
So should I ever make a hit
I guess I will never know
Could I be on your hit list?
I really prefer not to know
Yet sure enough I do suppose
Itsnice to see some action unfold
Unless you’re starring in the show
And taking on the leading roll
But that of course I’ll never know
Because you have the lightest toes
And hide in the darkest abode
And watch me work from your window
As if I’m too dumb to know
So I went into backup mode
And I bore arms a hundred fold
See me stationed at my post
Constantly marching to and fro
Hoping that after something blows
It might very well explode
And precisely let me know
When you’re ready to go
And surely as you would suppose
I have never left my post
Because I don’t know
where this unfolds
So I remain here on my own
Waiting for my guns to load.


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on Jul. 18 2010 at 8:01 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I don't know...I have this annoying habit of getting off-subject...

on Jul. 18 2010 at 6:16 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

not mad, curious. i want to soothe you captain. how did we get here captain?

on Jul. 9 2010 at 12:31 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, nothing, I was just making you mad...again

on Jul. 8 2010 at 11:29 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

the imagery thing said i wasnt going to swallow you. what are you talking about?

on Jul. 7 2010 at 9:09 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I would believe that, I suppose, if you hadn't just created an entire imagery thing...

on Jul. 6 2010 at 8:23 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

but in the end you still dont trust me so you wont go into the cave? i'm not going to swallow you captain.

on Jul. 6 2010 at 2:27 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Ah.  Well, actually, the cave thing came from a book I just recently finished, and I thought it coincidental so I used it. 

on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:34 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

and dreamwriter15 went on hallucinatin, just'a kept hallucinatin bout being swallowed whole and the cave said "trust me" and dreamwriter was too paranoid to listen so the narrarator said "shut up and trust him or your out of the story, just'a outta the story"... its a song.

on Jul. 3 2010 at 9:17 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

and Dreamwriter15 went deeper and deeper into the cave until it became a living thing that breathed with deep breaths and swallowed her whole...

on Jul. 3 2010 at 12:04 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

and dreamwriter15 went just'a walking into the cave, scared and all, just'a walking into the cave, and the cave said "trust me".

on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:18 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Alrighty....[steps up way too close and personal without realizing it, looking behind shoulder to the shadows that lay beyond the light that may consume me and my memory]

on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:50 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

just stay close to me captain.

on Jul. 1 2010 at 11:30 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Good, you had me worried there....but now I think I forgot something.....

on Jul. 1 2010 at 2:57 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I guess I'll just adopt your meaning, because I ..oh wait, I remember me now.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:16 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

well, I said true to what I meant it to mean, and so I responded accordingly

on Jun. 27 2010 at 12:34 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

its funny you say true, because i dont even know what i just said. but yeah, that was nice.

on Jun. 25 2010 at 3:44 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

True.  Maybe I could say "This is increasingly pleasing to my enjoyment in the order of the way poetry goes..."

on Jun. 21 2010 at 5:55 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

not if i over analyze it and run dna tests to extract some encoding super-encrypted meaning to eradicate the usualness in that statement.

on Jun. 20 2010 at 12:22 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I suppose my "I love it!" 's would get boring...

on Jun. 20 2010 at 3:20 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i love your inputism. thank you captain.