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I need you

October 5, 2009
By LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"


I'm so cold that I'm shaking, you are the only thing on my mind, I've got to hold on until the end, I'm tough but not as tough as you, I'm shaking more and more now it's so cold, I know that I can't go now it's not my time, no chimes ringing, I'm still here barely, I can see your face now as I sqeeze my hands into fists, I'm not going to quit on you or myself, my heart is barely beating, my body temp is way down, I need some warmth, I need you!


The author's comments:
I got hyperthermia this includes some of the thing that were on my mind at this time

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on Oct. 23 2009 at 3:01 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Again, this is a really good idea, I just think it could be so much better if you improved your flow, that kind of thing. Great job!

on Oct. 16 2009 at 2:14 pm
LadiesMan PLATINUM, Great Falls, Montana
41 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death"

please vote for me it would mean a lot to me thank you