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Whisper in my ear

October 7, 2009
By AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
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Beat in my heart
~ like summer thunder
~ like pouring rain
Rush through my veins
~ like water in a river
~ like wind through the grass
Tangle in my hair
~ like the harsh winter wind
~ like a dream that gives me hope
Slip through my fingers
~ like the hours in a day
~ like the passing of a friend
Dance before my eyes
~ like lightening in the sky
~ like waves on the water

Whisper in my ear....

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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---Sixx--- PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 11:04 am
---Sixx--- PLATINUM, /, Other
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\&quot;To see what a man is like, take a look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.\&quot;

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this is great! the sensory language really helps me SEE what you are writing about. awesome work!
greg9381 GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 1:37 pm
greg9381 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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i love it!!
lifeisabeautifullie said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 9:07 am
this is great Amelia!!