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Wondering

October 10, 2009
By -Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous


Sitting in the dark thinking about her,
Wondering if she's thinking about me too.
Can't believe I'm insane enough to think this might actually work: Not willing to accept reality.
Deep down inside I know she'll be just like the others, but I still throw myself out there anyways;
Hoping that by some grace of God she'll be the one.


The author's comments:
This isn't one of my best writings, but I decided to put it on the website because I believe that almost everyone goes through these thoughts at some point and time,and I just hope people can relate to it.

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on Jan. 24 2010 at 5:17 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

Jatavion, you are a veryyy good writer. You conveyed your message with not a lot of words, and each word holds true to what (i interpret) the meaning is. Good job!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:51 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

way to be on here on christmas... lol =D

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 3:13 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Thanks so much :)

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:21 pm
Drama_Queen13 DIAMOND, Nantucket, Massachusetts
51 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live Life Like A Song."

I love this poem too. Wow, you're really good!

on Jan. 20 2010 at 5:00 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

You're welcome. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...Keep writing!

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 9:38 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

Thanks Shernay :)

on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:23 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awwww. This is cute. I like it. And it's true a lot of people do go through these thoughts. I thought I was the only person who thinks like this, but I found that out a while ago that I am not. I like how you can create a piece that relates to everyone. Good job!

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 7:50 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

thanks jess.

btw, the answer would be yes

on Dec. 28 2009 at 4:02 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

I love it Jata. i can relate to this except I would replace her with him

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2009 at 1:15 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

i know :):)

Merry Christmas

on Dec. 20 2009 at 12:16 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

....... very random there jata :D

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 8:07 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

ghsjkhglkahdfg <randomness

on Nov. 25 2009 at 11:01 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

no... its ok i love you too :D

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 10:21 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

haha, thanks. i like five stars :)

Heart SILVER said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 10:20 pm
Heart SILVER, Arcadia, California
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Great job. Again. 5/5 :D

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 9:41 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

well now, way to take that the wrong way. lol

on Nov. 20 2009 at 5:33 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

no... i do not love you.... i like you, as a friend :D

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:18 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

you know you love me. lol

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 8:10 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

my comp is fixed. lol. im just waitnin on you still. lol

on Oct. 28 2009 at 4:48 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

yep...lol

so ya you should fix your comp. lol