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My Own Being

October 20, 2009
By AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1028 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

I don't feel pain, but my life isn't easy.
And yes I know I am my own best friend.
No one cares but I am so much stronger because I will fight until the end.
I need to escape from this true-false world...
This undamaged destiny
Can not get caught in this endless circle. This ring of stupidity.
Out with my own
Out to be free
One with my mind
Why cant you see??
I have no need to hear the things that they say, for, my life is for me to live in my own way.
Violate my mind and destroy my fellings,
but DO NOT tell me what to do.
I don't care because I'm on my own side I can see right through you.
Feed my brain with your so called standards. Who says that I am not living right??
I'll break away from your common fashion, then maybe you'll see through your blurry sight.

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This article has 28 comments.

Carol BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 6:35 pm
Carol BRONZE, Weslaco, Texas
3 articles 1 photo 33 comments
Wow, i've got nothing to say but wow. :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:41 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I love this!!!! I can feel your emotion in this. It is very deep and powerful. You are one talented writer and I am your fan. Keep on writing!

on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:52 pm
Kaylamic SILVER, Glenbeulah, Wisconsin
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I love this it's really good :)

WikdChick GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:24 pm
WikdChick GOLD, Shannon, Mississippi
11 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't need a friend who changes when I change and who nods when I nod; my shadow does that much better.
When childhood dies, its corpses are called adults and they enter society, one of the politer names of hell. That is why we dread children; even if we love them, they show us the state of our decay.

u have NO idea how close to describing me u came! i even wrote my own poem saying ALOT of watu just said!

LIKEwhoaa GOLD said...
on Dec. 5 2009 at 11:39 am
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois

This is definitely my favorite of all your stuff because i can relate to it.



on Nov. 3 2009 at 10:51 am
Lady_Savage GOLD, Schenectady, New York
15 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live life today because yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never come."

wow !! omggg i love this one soo much ! the message it sends out is soo strong. I feel the same way. This poem speaks loudly and i hear it =)

on Nov. 2 2009 at 9:55 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

I love the meaning.

The purpose.

The poem.

Feel free to check out some of my writing and drop some comments, I'd appreciate it. :D

on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:12 pm
twilighter_360 GOLD, NYOB, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A bird dosen't sing because it has an answer.A bird sings because it has a song." -- Maya Angelou

"Give peace a chance." --John Lennon

wowza...thats so beutiful