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October 21, 2009
By rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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Teardrops are falling off of her soft white cheek. The hurt she feels cuts so so deep. She just wants to quit. Why should she try? Could she possibly cry anymore? As she is pressed against the cold hard floor? She cant find a good reason to deep breathing. Not while she watches her dads car as its leaving. The pain is suffocating her. She knows things will never be as they were. All she can do now is sit and stare, stare at the picture as it lays there. It is her and her dad. O how she misses the fun they once had. But its all over now.

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rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:48 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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yes! of coarse i will look at your stuff =D
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:47 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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im so sorry to hear that =(
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:32 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

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I feel your emotions in this. Beautiful.
Tifini SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:15 am
Tifini SILVER, Danbury, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Don&rsquo;t say you love me unless you really mean it, because I might do something crazy like believe it.<br /> ~Crush<br /> <br /> Live as if your were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever. ~ Gandhiji

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Wow, i can relate to the deep fellings in this poem. My father is being just as difficult and i feel him slipping away as well
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:40 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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that wasent a compliment :P lol jk
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:15 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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....thanks
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:38 am
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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mmhm. :) ____________ (i love underscores. lol)
NorthernWriter said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 8:24 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
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&quot;Only dead fish swim with the stream&quot;

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please see my poems? pretty please? they are like...on pg. 2,845 and NO ONE READS THEM CAUSE THEY ARE SO FAR DEEP IN.
NorthernWriter said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 8:23 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
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&quot;Only dead fish swim with the stream&quot;

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sorry to have agressive comments..it is my nature! when i read this i remembered the quote "home is where the heart is"...but when your heart is split in two, could home possibly be the same?

don't have to take it!

IT IS YOUR POEM. not mine.
Brianna Taylor BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 7:00 pm
Brianna Taylor BRONZE, Stockton, California
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I lIKE IT .
CASTROLmatt GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 1:10 pm
CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
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&quot;Sometimes you have to take life less seriously to get where you want to be.&quot;

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Good stuff. It is deep.

Write on.
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 11:32 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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lol, well maybe i do have a little bit of a life :)
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 9:51 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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lol. we both know thats not true
EHunt96 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 6:01 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never give up on something you can&#039;t go a day without thinking about.&quot;

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I love this, this makes a great connection between a girl and her dad. Keep up the good work! ;)
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 4:12 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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what can i say...i have no life ;) lol
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 8:00 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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you talk online a lot!!! lol
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 4:19 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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haha, :D :P
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:46 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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haha, no problem.

and i won't. lol :)
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:44 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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thanks a bunch :D

im not usually that deep....dont get used to it lol ;)
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:35 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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this was deep hannah. good article though :)