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Side by Side

October 22, 2009
By stopper19 SILVER, Gap, Pennsylvania
stopper19 SILVER, Gap, Pennsylvania
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I’m by your side, I will never forsake you
Through any storm or trial I will pull you through
Over the mountains in your life,
I will lift you up on my wings and we will fly
Just grab my hand I’m offering it to you
I’ll get you off the dirty ground so you can start anew
I’ve given up my life for the ones I love
A harsh death I tolerated to win the battle over death
If you just believe, eternally you will be saved
And when you die we will forever be side by side

The author's comments:
I was inspired to write this piece from God's point of view talking to his children on the earth, comforting them and telling them that he will never leave them and he will help them through the trials in there lives.

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on Oct. 30 2009 at 11:25 pm
cassandra_2011 PLATINUM, North Pole, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Give in to love, or live in fear."

I agree. This is a great peace, it has good flow, a great image and story set place, no errors =)

Good job!

Harley BRONZE said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 10:07 am
Harley BRONZE, Liberty, West Virginia
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i really like this, i thought it was peaceful. Good job.