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In Love with the Fantasy

October 22, 2009
By Lovefairy SILVER, Westminster, Maryland
Lovefairy SILVER, Westminster, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why so Serious? - The Joker

In love with the Fantasy
Is something I will forever be
And I mask what is very true
Feeling I may never be with you

I am often believed to have charm
Yet I feel I will bring harm
It feels very delusional
And the pain is so emotional

In this world I have created
The name of my love has been stated
Her rich happiness and purity
I believe was not tainted by society

Her very life is different from mine
Her personality has given the sign
I know now it cannot be
But I am still in love with the Fantasy.

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This article has 9 comments.

on Nov. 2 2009 at 3:43 pm
JordanNicole SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Love is strange, powerful, and sneaky. You won\'t know it until you find it...and when you have it, never let it go!\" ~JordanNicole

I love this poem! I think I can relate to this....

on Nov. 2 2009 at 6:27 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

I liked the title and how its repeated in the last line.

I think this is a beautiful poem. :)

on Nov. 1 2009 at 7:41 pm
riotgirl1134 PLATINUM, Albrightsville, Pennsylvania
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You have incredible talent. That was absolutely beautiful.

on Oct. 30 2009 at 5:14 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is really well written! You combined so many themes to create one so well- everything flows. Great job- I've felt this way so much!

on Oct. 30 2009 at 10:15 am
ariwrites94 GOLD, Deltona, Florida
17 articles 4 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." ---Plato

wonderful poem! i have surely felt this way before. plz comment and rate my poem "Sensitive Am I." thankx! and once again great job!!!

on Oct. 28 2009 at 10:04 pm
cassandra_2011 PLATINUM, North Pole, Alaska
28 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give in to love, or live in fear."

Hey this is great! I think it would be good to add a few more punctuations like commas, it was hard to follow without them and maybe change it to just "I'm in love with fantasy"? I think people would still understand and it would flow better. It's definitely a great work though. I love the overall story as it created a picture in the reader's head. Great job!

on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:37 pm
Robsessed PLATINUM, McKinney, Texas
23 articles 1 photo 199 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I may be changed by what happens to me, but I refuse to be reduced by it." - Maya Angelou

"Did you know 'I told you so' has a brother, Jacob?" she asked cutting me off. "His name is 'Shut the hell up.'" - Bella Swan, Breaking Dawn

"In love with the Fantasy

Is something I will forever be

And I mask what is very true

Feeling I may never be with you" - that's so beautifully tragic and hopeless yet a relief at knowing the truth. I love how you phrased that verse. It's ironic that on the surface the poem is about Fantasy, but if you peel back the layers it's about Reality. Cool poem.

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 12:02 pm
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

i kno wat that feels like... except from a girls perspective

on Oct. 28 2009 at 11:11 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1028 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I love the emotion and felling that you have added to this peice. writings like this are ones that I can really tell come from personal experiences.